Today we received feedback from our teachers regarding the first draft of our film opening.
The feedback was:
What went well - text/font titles and shot following him down the train.
It would be even better if - more titles in stick places, cut from platform to Alicia in shot a bit jolly, music too repetitive, no title at the end, face unclear.
We also received feedback from our peers.
The feedback was:
What went well - text/font titles and shot following him down the train.
It would be even better if - more titles in stick places, cut from platform to Alicia in shot a bit jolly, music too repetitive, no title at the end, face unclear.
We also received feedback from our peers.
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